Thursday, February 27, 2014

Explanation - Good School by Akanesi

5 comments:

  1. I agree with you because good school is a place for us to play, learn and grow together, fantastic explanation.

    Edith,Carra.

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  2. I like the way that you gave details and information keep up the good work. by Aja

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  3. I like the way you have powerful words .by rynnette

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  4. I like the way you explain what a good school is, but next time you could try to read your work and make sure it makes sense.

    by Hevani and Destiny.

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  5. Hi Akanesi, you have done a great job on your explanation! You have included lots of good ideas and used paragraphs to give us more detail about each of your ideas. Keep up the good work. I think Tamaki Primary must be a good school!

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