Sunday, October 19, 2014

Persuasive writing, Akanesi

Should children have a television in their bedroom? I think that children should not have television in the their bedroom because they don’t have any adult and it will hurt their eyes when watching too much t.v. The first reason is that it is extremely dangerous for your eyesight when they watched too much t.v. The second reason is that you can get very bad stuff from it because your parents will not even know what you are watching. Another reason is that children will be cheeky and stayed up late at night just to watched a movie or a programme. So children should not have a t.v in their room until they are old and responsible enough.

Monday, October 13, 2014

Should children use mobiles? by Akanesi

Children should not use mobiles because they can lose concentration and lose control too. They are not responsible to use mobiles because if they drop it and crack it,it will waste their Mum and Dad’s money.


The first reason is that Children should not use mobiles because they can extremely make people cry and  have terrible feelings while texting unkind words to each other.


The second reason is that Children can get into fights and bad things like Punching,Smacking and Kicking by texting to each other “ Meet me at the park so we can have our fight”!

Children don’t need to use mobiles before they a mature enough to handle pressure from their friends or anyone. It is a good tool to use but it is also dangerous when you don’t know how to use it wisely.

Should children use mobiles? by Levi

Mobile phones may be cool but they can also be extremely dangerous.

The first reason why is because people can bully each other.

The second reason is that they text and talk to each other without even focusing  on what they suppose  to be doing.

Another reason is that because they are just wasting their money or their parent;s money on a phone when they could be buying something thats needed.

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